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#170401 - 08/25/08 01:50 AM Check it out.
Ladysnare Offline
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Registered: 05/16/03
Loc: New Jersey
I am working to become a better writer. Let me know what you think.
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#170433 - 08/25/08 08:12 PM Re: Check it out. [Re: Ladysnare]
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Registered: 12/17/07
Loc: USA
change your playback style to marching band, that'll fix your diddles.

As for the cadence, maybe a few less "loose ends at the end of phrases".
And a cymbal part?


Edited by CarrollDrummer (08/25/08 08:13 PM)
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#170506 - 08/26/08 10:09 PM Re: Check it out. [Re: CarrollDrummer]
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Thank you.


Edited by Ladysnare (08/26/08 10:09 PM)

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#170562 - 08/27/08 09:57 PM Re: Check it out. [Re: Ladysnare]
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yeah no problem. I'd actually like to hear it with the clean diddles too.
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#170653 - 08/30/08 09:34 AM Re: Check it out. [Re: CarrollDrummer]
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Registered: 09/23/07
Loc: Beaver, Pennsylvania
work on some really nice grove to put in there. groves are something that will make the fans at the football games and competitions latch onto you guys and like you. even at competitions (if you do competitions) other drumlines in the stands will be like why isn't our cadence rocking like that?!?
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#170921 - 09/04/08 12:46 AM Re: Check it out. [Re: gniknus11]
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Registered: 09/03/08
Loc: Texas
not a bad start, the most important part of any piece for battery is the begging and ends of phrases that is the only week point in the writing other than that sweet stuff
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#170926 - 09/04/08 03:31 AM Re: Check it out. [Re: PantherDLine]
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Thanks


Edited by Ladysnare (09/04/08 03:32 AM)

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