Well, back to the topic now, I really like this cadence for the most part, as said before, it is a little repetitive at times, but honestly that’s really kind of what a cadence is, so no shame there. I especially like the ending with all of the different breaks in the different sections, although it has been done before, it was a nice touch and you made it your own. Overall, I applaud you.
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drumming f n rules, but if you don't agree, i guess you're entitled to your own opinion, but your opinion is wrong!